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[SSC: ep 2]

You are doing a great job

the review on this is the same review on the first episode. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. It seems that the Masterhand has some plans up his sleeves (lol, he's just a hand), but anyways, it seems that he controls everything except the mind and the controls of the fighters. So he's going to do whatever it takes to make sure no one tries to defeat him. There were some questions that have been bothering me. Like, Why did Mario fight Samus, Kirby, and Lucario, instead of trying to get them to help rebel against the Masterhand? Where did Falco go after he got hit by the robotic verison of sonic? I guess I have to find out in the next episode, right? well still it's a story, an interesting plot, and the fighting is still good, even if it was a little to slow, I don't care, you're doing an awesome job, and I can't wait to see what happens. Also for the next episode, put a main menu, and a scene selection in there too.

sonicmcbob responds:

because in that scene they were trying to keep it secret that they were going to rebel against him. so they were still playing along that they were gona fight each other for the master hands twisted amusment

[Sonic Kids 1: Food Fight]

This is a good start for a series

I have to admit, it was pretty good, I like how you got the idea that you have all the Sonic characters as little kids. Also I like the animation, and the episode by its self. But there were a few problems like you could have the Sonic characters talk, like having voice actors kind of talk, basically having audio in there, because I had a hard time finding out what the characters were saying with some of the words were confusing and were a different meaning to it, or something like that. You also need sound effects for everything, along with music for also everything. That's all I'm saying. But other than that you did a pretty good job on it, and I can't wait to see some more of this series.

SonicKid101 responds:

Thanks for that, an sory about the languige being bad, I'm still learning

[Super Mario Invaded pt.2]

You did a pretty good job

I'll give you a 10 for it, because it is a good series and I really don't give a fuck about good spelling at all, as long as I can understand what the characters are saying. Besides, I'm not good in English and I hate it too. But one thing was a problem, IT WAS TOO SHORT!!!!!!! This was a little shorter than the first one if I recall. You could have extended it a little bit more. But other than that, it's an awesome series. Lots of sprites used for the characters going into one video game world to another, fighting other video game characters, good story, and it was nice to see what happen before the fight between the Mario Bros. and the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. Keep up the good work and make the third one longer than this one.

sleeeeep responds:

yikes this one was longer by nearly two minutes! haha. But thanks for this review. In the sequal the story will move along a bit more then in the past 2 movies. And ill try to make it a lil more lengthy. And yeah i totally agree... BOOH spelling! thanks for the review frien!

[TakeTwo - Censorship]

it was good but there was one problem....

YOU DIDN'T TALK ABOUT THE WHOLE CENSERSHIP. All you talked about mostly was about video games and the things that happen to the video game industry, and parents getting upset about how there were violence in video games that kids were playing. You didn't actually talk about censorship, just the conflict about video games being violent, and sexual. That was all there was in your flash. You need to change your title from censorship to I don't know maybe video games or conflicts on video games or something related to video games and parents getting angry about it. Also I don't like that kind of animation, no offense, I was almost distracted by the guy's mouth and how it's mouth would just move up everytime he talked which was the whole time. I'm just saying. You need to change the title and you need to change how the guy speaks if you are reading this. That's all. But all in all, it was good, and I learn something out of it too.

Nqkoi1 responds:

The title ruined your experience?

[MEGAMAN Zero's]

It was pretty good

for like a middle of a series. I think you need to work on the beginning a little bit more. It seems you just started the series at the middle of it, and no beginning. I didn't know what was going on and basically all I saw was fighting. Also I think it would be better if you had some background music between fights. So work on the beginning part first, have a plot, and add music to it, and you got yourself a great series. Oh and also make the text of each character be more slower, and clearer, I had a little trouble trying to read the text, and I know that it's hard for you to make characters talking at the speed of your reading but other people aren't good at that like me. And one more thing, you need to add a preloader in these flashes. So in summary, once again, make a beginning first (show what is going on), have a plot (story), add background music, make the captions of the characters slowy, and clearly, and add a preloader, and you got yourself, a nice series.

globep responds:

I SHOULD Try and get better , but I got so used to stickman animations that i LOST my sprite skills.O
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[Madness Max SHOOTS]

hmph...

RACIST!!!!!

FlasherToni responds:

Why?

[Super smash crash trailer]

Technically it wasn't a review

it was more of a short episode, and I hope later on we get to find out what happened to the others, since Master Hand said that those were the last three and he would crush them like he did with the others, so can't wait to see that. I like the animation, and you made to text at a normal speed, which I can read the whole thing. To me, this didn't look like a trailer, it was more of a episode 1, but short. Keep up the good work.

sonicmcbob responds:

no offense but if u read the name it has the word TRAILER in it meaning its only a trailer not the first episode. so

[Super mario quest 3]

yeah but there is a difference

There is a difference between a good flash and a bad one. A good flash gets people to respect you and let you know that you're flash is great. And a bad one.... well let's just say on one would want to see any of your flashes ever again. It's the same thing for a movie. Director don't see a problem with the movie and say well a movie is a movie, because then nobody would want to see the movie, or if they do, then most of them would want their money back and complain to the director, and the producers. Same with a musician making a song, or an author making a book. You really needs to improve on your animation.... a lot. Basically you just got lazy and made a half fast job on this flash. It's like homework. You need to remake this flash and make it a whole lot better. You're getting more lazy, like you don't care about the work that you make. It sickens me when people do that. It's a waste of time for both the person that is working on something and the people to watch it. Come on man, I know you can do better. Actually I would redo the whole thing and have a story to it, and everything. I'm just saying this for you of constructive criticism.

Toad5355 responds:

Im not mad thankyou for constructed criticism everything that you said was true please PM me if you have any tips