Pianogod's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[SSC: ep 1]

OK, It was good

yeah the flash was good, but there were some things that could have been added to make it more like a 10. First you have it where when you click on the movie, you started with a fight which I don't mind, but it would be better if you had a preloader and a main menu, so you can watch the movie, or go to the scene selection to finish where people left off at when he/she had to do something in the middle of it. I love the story, the plot, and the fighting. I notice that you had different sprite characters that weren't in the offical Super Smash Bros. games, and I'm not going to penalize you on that, in fact, I sometimes wish that the most popular games were in the Super Smash Bros. game. I just think that you need a main menu with a scene selection. Keep up the good work, and thanks for letting me know that you have submitted your flash movies. Now on to the 2nd episode.

[Mario and Golden Mushroom]

Yeah it started out good...

until you put stupid Naruto shit in there which I just think you shouldn't have done in the first place. It should have been just Mario attacking the army. I don't know if this was some excuse just to put Naruto sprites in a flash or whatever it was, you just ruined a good flash movie. I'm sorry to say this, but it just could have been a lot better without the that stupid Naruto piece of shit. Seriously, why not have Mario attack the koopas with the wand spell on them, instead of summoning different sprite characters, to do the work for him. I give you some credit for the plot, the soon to be a story and the music for the battle with Mario and the army of koopas, that was the good parts about that.

[Sonic Kids 1: Food Fight]

This is a good start for a series

I have to admit, it was pretty good, I like how you got the idea that you have all the Sonic characters as little kids. Also I like the animation, and the episode by its self. But there were a few problems like you could have the Sonic characters talk, like having voice actors kind of talk, basically having audio in there, because I had a hard time finding out what the characters were saying with some of the words were confusing and were a different meaning to it, or something like that. You also need sound effects for everything, along with music for also everything. That's all I'm saying. But other than that you did a pretty good job on it, and I can't wait to see some more of this series.

SonicKid101 responds:

Thanks for that, an sory about the languige being bad, I'm still learning

[Super Mario Invaded pt.2]

You did a pretty good job

I'll give you a 10 for it, because it is a good series and I really don't give a fuck about good spelling at all, as long as I can understand what the characters are saying. Besides, I'm not good in English and I hate it too. But one thing was a problem, IT WAS TOO SHORT!!!!!!! This was a little shorter than the first one if I recall. You could have extended it a little bit more. But other than that, it's an awesome series. Lots of sprites used for the characters going into one video game world to another, fighting other video game characters, good story, and it was nice to see what happen before the fight between the Mario Bros. and the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. Keep up the good work and make the third one longer than this one.

sleeeeep responds:

yikes this one was longer by nearly two minutes! haha. But thanks for this review. In the sequal the story will move along a bit more then in the past 2 movies. And ill try to make it a lil more lengthy. And yeah i totally agree... BOOH spelling! thanks for the review frien!

[TakeTwo - Censorship]

it was good but there was one problem....

YOU DIDN'T TALK ABOUT THE WHOLE CENSERSHIP. All you talked about mostly was about video games and the things that happen to the video game industry, and parents getting upset about how there were violence in video games that kids were playing. You didn't actually talk about censorship, just the conflict about video games being violent, and sexual. That was all there was in your flash. You need to change your title from censorship to I don't know maybe video games or conflicts on video games or something related to video games and parents getting angry about it. Also I don't like that kind of animation, no offense, I was almost distracted by the guy's mouth and how it's mouth would just move up everytime he talked which was the whole time. I'm just saying. You need to change the title and you need to change how the guy speaks if you are reading this. That's all. But all in all, it was good, and I learn something out of it too.

Nqkoi1 responds:

The title ruined your experience?

[Haunted House of Terror]

Ok I have to admit....

that sure did made me laugh. It was so funny especially the third part (I don't want to spoil the flash for those who haven't seen it yet). For a second I thought it was going to be scary until later when it got funny. I couldn't stop funny. I wish that some of the words were in English. I couldn't understand any of it. But anyways, way to go. I loved it.

[MEGAMAN Zero's]

It was pretty good

for like a middle of a series. I think you need to work on the beginning a little bit more. It seems you just started the series at the middle of it, and no beginning. I didn't know what was going on and basically all I saw was fighting. Also I think it would be better if you had some background music between fights. So work on the beginning part first, have a plot, and add music to it, and you got yourself a great series. Oh and also make the text of each character be more slower, and clearer, I had a little trouble trying to read the text, and I know that it's hard for you to make characters talking at the speed of your reading but other people aren't good at that like me. And one more thing, you need to add a preloader in these flashes. So in summary, once again, make a beginning first (show what is going on), have a plot (story), add background music, make the captions of the characters slowy, and clearly, and add a preloader, and you got yourself, a nice series.

globep responds:

I SHOULD Try and get better , but I got so used to stickman animations that i LOST my sprite skills.O
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