There some improvement that can be made
The story is not that bad, and I love how you use a lot of swear words in there, and make it so fucking funny. But there are some improvement that can be made for this.
#1: Make the fonts big. I could barely read that the characters were saying, except the Deku Tree.
#2: Put a "to be continue" at the end of the flash, with credits too. It feels ackward when someone just cuts the flash off in the middle of it, and goes striaght back to the preloader.
#3: I know you mention it, but still I have to put it down, you need audio, and music, and (maybe possible) voice actors, to add in the flash.
#4: You mention it too, but still again I have to put it down, you need to make it a little longer then that. If you're going to make a series, you have to make the episodes really long, but not too long.
Well, there you go, those the things that needs to be made in order for this to be improve, so far you have a 8/10, add them and it would will be a 10/10, well for me that is. I can't wait to see what you do next.